GoldFlame

Flame here! I definitely agree with the previous reviewer (loved your idea and writing style!). Here's just some quick thoughts... Sometimes I found that you were inserting phrases and sentences ...

Hey, that's it? I thought that you ended kind of abruptly. You just introduced the problem, and the narrator shrugs it off. Period. :) I wanted to read more!!! Now, ...

GoldFlame here for a quick review! I love your writing, first of all. It was a simple, beautiful piece about a complicated subject, and you were able to incorporate some ...

Hi, GoldFlame here for a quick review! I love your writing style; you've definitely mastered fluency and rhythm. You've also got me hooked! I don't really many errors to report, ...

Hi, GoldFlame here for a review! I really think it's a deep and unique poem. One thing I loved was the simplicity of it; you reasoned that a poem about ...

Hi, GoldFlame here with a review... Absolutely loved it! It was beautiful writing, and you really mastered fluency and rhythm. As mentioned by a previous reviewer, the poem was short ...