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Re: The Lion and the Monkey
First of all you categorized this as a short story. I don't think it should be because short stories are short and complete. This was not complete. You can do ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: God's Wonder
Absolutely LOVED the message. The idea is perfect! I also loved the word choice: joy, rejoice, enticing, clang. You got a little repetitive however, "piano playing playfully?" Didn't like the ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Swallows of Siberia
This story is very interesting. I don't even know where to start. I love the ideas and the word choice. However, I can't find a plot, and the story is ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Forever & Always
I loved the emotion in these words. I loved the title, and the metaphors. However, the change in mood was very sudden. It went from deep sorrow to great pleasure ...
Jul 9, 2013