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oh, thx, didnt notice that, one of those commas was supposed to be a period. peace.

Very interesting, i read the other ppls comments, and felt i must say something- the "loose ends" well, i think they are actually a plus, they make you want to ...

yeah, i can see that. ill try it, and see what other ppl say.

It was good. well written, good description, nice flow, at the end, it has a nice ... finality... to it. four stars.