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Re: Deep Breathing
This was very good! I liked the rhythm of it, but one thing I would suggest if you do not mind is that maybe you could make the rhymes easier ...
Nov 17, 2019 -
Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay
This was really great! I love the hunger games, and while at first I did not like Effie, I really liked her in Mockingjay and Catching Fire. She really cared ...
Oct 30, 2019 -
Re: Roses
Wow. This was very interesting! The title of your story is simple, but the story itself is so complex! Could/would you do a sequel? I'd like to know why the ...
Oct 30, 2019 -
Re: The beginning of something I haven't thought of a title for yet
Hi 4evgreen! This looks promising so far. I like how you describe the misfits as people that "are pretty, but hidden behind bad haircuts and hand me down clothes" thats ...
Oct 29, 2019