Gladergrande

Thanks a lot! :)

And oh, I know grammar, okay. Don't lecture me about it :) We did, we did not... Blah blah thingy, I know those :) Thanks:)

And not that I'm bragging, but I've been writing for 9 years now, well I'm 16 and... I guess I've known enough about metaphors and if you don't get my ...

Aww this made my day!!! Thanks for saying that part where I shouldn't let people tell me how short my poem is, thanks :) Anyway, I am happy that you ...

Thank you! :)

It's supposed to be metaphorical, not the literal way you want me to write it. Plus, the poem isn't necessarily about clocks, I just used how CLOCKS have TIME and ...

Lol thank you. Sorry for the crappy typos, I do know devastated and those spacing blues, it was just typo hahaha. thanks again for the review, it'll help :)

Aw thank you very much :)

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I'm glad you got the metaphor I was trying to convey!!! I got overly excited hahaha because most people don't get the metaphor magic I did with that haha

awww thanks!! :) I kept it short, so the readers would be like, "What? that's it?!" and yeah... hihihi ^_^ it's cruel, I know haha

I commented on my own work haha I don't care lol. Since I haven't got enough points to post my next poem (insert sad face here) and I've got about ...