GirsBlueAvenger

I enjoyed this much, and would like to see how it plays out. I like how the guy actually has a form of chivalry, because your character's right most guys ...

I love when people write from personal experiences. The story ends up even more believable. I'll say something i've pretty much read every story you've wrote on here. Keep up ...

I did wonder what they looked like also. But being up at past 4am and reading and something actually catching my attention is pretty rare haha But I read this ...

Gives you a gold star ^ ^ I liked it . Kinda confused what it's about but a very cute poem none the less. Flowed easily keep up the work ...

Besides the reference to perfection and twilight book characters, I enjoyed it ^^. Question though how old exactly are your characters? And I'd like to know more of how Ebony ...

I second what SheepMonoxide but that is exactly why you don't go and sleep with something after only knowing them for 3 days.... Can't wait to read more. Didn't find ...

That's just painful keeping the reader on pins and needles waiting to see what comes next. See that's what happens when you through yourself at a complete stranger. Which I'm ...

I've read all of your chapter to the work. I can truthfully say this is my favorite story on here, even though I tend to lead more towards vampire or ...

I love it also. Though wait she is 11 and he is 14? or are they older since they've first met. If not. that part creeped me out a bit, ...