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Re: Operation 16 (Chapter 3)
It is a pretty good story but I do have some comments there was not much sequence it seemed sorta mixed up and there were many grammar mistakes it was ...
Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:07 pm -
Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Great story
Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:00 pm -
Re: Chapter Two
It was a great chapter it really held my attention
Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:58 pm