Gingahcakes

thank you!

Hope you get it!

i shall!!!! hey can you do a review for a story i wrote? it's the first chapter. It's a batman story. I need to know what people think of it ...

dang it...........almost perfect. lol XD. thx so much for pointing that out, I never would have noticed that! And the third stanza was the person taking the phone from the ...

thx and yes it is the same with my other poem. I love using this certain poem format. And I love adding humor into my poems or stories. Thx again. ...

Oooohhh....I found this quite dark, but I liked it. Yet, I agree with Kanome, the lining was off. Other than that, it was FANTABULOUS! The descriptive words really sucked me ...

lol thx!!! and yes I will work on the choppiness of the poem.....might make it better. :D

thx!!!

thx!!!

Thank you very much! I also don't know how to break it up into stanzas when I edit it.....help? You will also see more of my works soon. Thanks again. ...

Thank you sooo much!!! I used to do a lot of poetry when I was younger, but stopped. I'm so glad I started it up again! I changed the ending, ...

a ray of sunlight?

moon, sun, stars? idk...........

Is it a cloud?