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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Trampling On Your Own Dreams

    A bit reminiscent of a hagiography. On ANOTHER note, this prologue is neither gripping nor poignant--in fact, its telling us that we 'will' cry, and 'want to help me' actually ...

    Aug 21, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The dead of night

    Hello, ladypurple. You made a pretty and unique comparison with rain to dancers. I really like how the second paragraph reads. That said, the first paragraph seems a bit...clashing. I ...

    Jun 15, 2010


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