GibsonGirl

I don't know as much about poetry as backgroudbob, but I also thought it didn't flow well. When I read it to myself it seemed slightly off. I don't have ...

I agree with Maggie, the Druid rhyme was a little forced and didn't seem to fit the theme of the song. You could try changing it, even if it doesn't ...

i've had enough of this i've had enough of live I don't really understand this part. What does it mean that you've had enough of live? You could try changing ...