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Hi Sulagna, Reviewing here. I think this was a good topic for a story. The feeling of having a crush on a friend back in school is all too familiar. ...

Hey Fleur, I like your writing style. I felt like you dropped us right into the the scene and nailed it. I could feel how Marsella was feeling, all nerves ...

This was definitely tragic piece and the beginning lines were a great way to hook us. I liked how the short sentences/lines fit the story, making it feel fast pace ...