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hehe. Made me laugh. It also shows the true insanity inside you. *smiles and backs away* *runs to hills*

Lorraine Thellois. As you are the only applicant so far...you've won! Please accept this pair of sunglasses, as modelled by this guy: 8). I cant edit the title on here, ...

Oh, and rthere is a reason for the murder and stuff, though. Just for people to know, i didn't make it up on the spur of the moment. And unfortunatley, ...

Thanks SNoik. I'll work on, well, everything.

I thought it was clever, rather than corny, but maybe that's me being a simpleton. Simple, well formatted, easily flowing dialog. I just liked the shallowness of it all, and ...

Thanks for crit, everyone. There's more to come, and i'll also iron out all the errors in the first part. Thanks :)

Thanks for the crit. I'll be sure to correct the italics thing. I'vr never read or seen [i]One flew over.[/i].. so its co-incidenc-honest!

lol, it is a bit mish-mash but I wrote it in like, 10 minutes. Hunter, the troll is a metaphor- lol, I actually thought people might think that, being Fatasy ...

Cool, I'm pleased. I've taken everything on board, and I'm over-the-moon that no-one has beenr ude enough to say "it's awful". Oh, and btw I love the fact the spewing ...

Thanks for all comments so far. I think the general feeling is that it's a good idea that has lots of potenial, but the writing is flawed in many places. ...

Oh look, I'm tired. Is this sarcasm? 'Cos I'm seriously too tired to tell. I know it's long, but I think people can manage it.

Will someone please crit this?

LOL, thank you. :D

Shameless bump. Don't judge me!! :(

Thanks for all your comments so far, and I realise how cheesy Helping Hands now sounds. Reicheru, I hear what you say about choosing what I want myself but I ...