Gardevite

My bb code worked still got it

So I just revamped my review thread, and I found this. I think the reason I kept putting this off and off is because there's not much to be said! ...

Short and sweet, love it!

Your review prompted me to do some research and line breakers do denote a pause, thanks for the advice!

Thanks for your comments! Just to clarify a few things: -I was always taught that line break does not indicate a pause. It varies from person to person though. -The ...

Oh I'm not offended at all! I have thick skin. :) But I'd like to point out that basically anything goes or doesn't go in poetry, including capitalization and punctuation. ...

This poem isn't about anxiety (not sure where you got that from, to be honest). It's about drugs and relationships, how they intersect, and how they are similar in stages ...

Green is for envy. ^_^

Ohh thank you. That's very nice of you to say. ^_^ Oh, and the full stops between stanzas are just to keep the formatting right. ^_^ I'm very glad you ...

Stanza 1: Describes a painkiller box, and compares it to the whole world. I.e. The drug is the world. The drug is everything. Stanza 2: In this poem, pleasurable feelings ...

Drug addiction. I thought it was really obvious. o_o

The first stanza is important because it gives the biggest hint as to what the poem is about. XD And thank you for the compliments!

Thank you for the kind words! I feel bad in correcting you, but this poem isn't exactly about religion. XD

She figured it out. ;) There'll be a flashback soon. :D