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Re: A Knight of Courage
Hey Ookamikitsune! I like the concept and interaction between the siblings, it felt very natural. The other two have some really good points, so I’m just going to nitpick and ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Lights: Chapter One *Edited*
Hello halfmetal! I like the setting concept of a mechanical world in the midst of a revolution. It seems extremely unique and like it has the potential for a lot ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Fallen Angel Chapter 1
Ok, first I wanted to say that this is my first ever review so please forgive me if I’m too harsh, or not harsh enough. Secondly, I wanted to say ...
Mar 29, 2013
