Galerius

Hi Eraqio, I apologize for the previous reviews; it's a sad day when nobody can find anything wrong with a poem and those who do , satisfy themselves with correcting ...

Hi Helpful McHelpfulpants, A sonnet, eh? Part of the problem with these things is that in the struggle to synchronize syllables and bestow the semblance of a kind of consistency, ...

Hi Sachiko, How this thing managed to receive so many gold stars, I will never know. As it stands, it's a poor piece, something that sounds as if you took ...

Hi Kamas, This is worse than your poem involving Native Americans. It is not as good as much of what you have posted on the literature forums, for (thankfully) topical ...

Hi peanut19, I clinch my fist, the jagged edges of the rock cutting into my hand. It was supposed to be my weapon but she told me to leave. I ...

Hi Elinor Brynn, First of all, the picture doesn't make sense. Who is that blended into the trees? A nymph? A witch? Whatever she is, she doesn't appear at all ...

Hi KnightlyAngel09, I'm not sure what happened here. Your poems, to my memory, used to reflect a depth that is nowhere near present in this mass of teenage angst and ...

xD Yes, she does suck pretty bad. And she plugs her ears and runs at the slightest critisim of her books, which I hate the most. She doesn't understand that ...

Elinor Brynn: Do not critique works when you have no idea what you're talking about. Learn how to review and how to analyze poetry. Kylan: This would be impressive if ...

Hi Forestqueen808, This poem is bad, very bad. No matter if one is new to poetry or not, one should realize that "Why can't I be perfect? Why can't I ...

Hi cassie17, This has no place in literature, poetry or otherwise. It's basically a writer regurgitating out senseless emotions and feelings into one giant clump of indeterminable ideas, meshed togeth

Hi peanut19, Around her feet, the ashes fly. Fading to the night are memories of what she left behind. You're grasping at imagery here, but it's not coming together. "the ...

Hi Kylan, I'm not going to go into too much detail with this one. I liked the beginning and the some of the middle, really showed the cascade of emotions ...

Hi maegardens, This doesn't make any sense. I know that it's probably a "fun" poem that isn't supposed to be logical, but even in it's own world it doesn't make ...

Hi Edgar Allan Joe, Very nice. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, if not purely for the content then for the way that it strung along the reader and made him ...