Gabe

cool. i really like. I hope eventually you incorperate this into some bigger story. As was already said I liked the emotion. And the sword fight was brilliant. It made ...

Jocelyn . . .Jocelyn . . .Jocelyn you sicken me. Only you would write something so horrid haha

this is just a short piece. I just wanted to post something and see what people say about it. Give me some practice. I have done some reasarch in the ...

This poems flows very nicely, i like how you brake up your sentences in each line. I'm not reallh sure i get what its about, but i have some ideas, ...

just so you know i did have to hand this in. I read it aloud. So i ignored gramatical errors and didn't read it word for word

just so you know i did have to hand this in. I read it aloud. So i ignored gramatical errors and didn't read it word for word

it is true, vernon, that the emperor did want to surrender, but only after we had bombed them. and plus, they only wanted to surrender to the US. They would ...