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Don't be afraid to be as harsh as possible. A writer needs to learn to take constructive criticism (if the criticism is reasonable, of course). Thanks for the review.

Sorry, but this is my first completed novel. I'm not the best at writing really long chapters as no one on here would read them or review them. I am ...

No worries! Happy Review Day! >w

I am very fond of your work as well. You're a great writer. Thanks for the review!

Thanks again for following this the whole way through! You get a gold star, my friend.

Dan isn't experienced with "normal-guy" sort of things, and Ophelia was his only friend in this world. I think it would be natural of him to cry because of it. ...

"Demoning Away" is a term frequently used in Japanese Manga that has to do with demons or Spirits in which they use "Spiriting Away" as well. It's not technically an ...

No they are not literally siblings, but thanks for the review!

Thanks! I wanted to bring out the humor in Kevin calling Shoko an "idiot," because that's also what I do with my good friends.

I'll send you a PM with information on it. I'm glad you're interested!

It's supposed to be unique. Kevin is not transgender. Kevin is "apparently" a boy's name but her name is supposed to be unique for her. Kevin doesn't have a set ...

Thanks! My friend, ParanormalMyth has followed the novel all the way through, and they found it played with their emotions in the end. I hope you like it!

I wanted to pour all of the emotion out on this last chapter, and I'm glad it affected you as it did (No, I don't want you to be sad ...

Thanks, Rage! I appreciate this review~

Thanks, Myth!