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Re: Intellectual Barbie
the poem (bubblewrap) was extremely true for me because i can sort of relate to it. i loved the wording and overall, it's pretty good in terms of subject-matter and ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: The Audition
hey, this was pretty good in terms of tension and bringing in emotions but i agree with the other reviewers, it would have been better if written as a piece ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: Dream
awesome poem! just loved the imagery and although the rhyming at the beginning seemed a little forced, the wording was beautiful. You mite wanna work on the rhythm in this ...
Jan 22, 2006