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Re: Back to Square One. (1)
Hey, kudos to you. The story kept me captivated to the end! Margaret sort of creeps me out. She seems like a tiger, waiting in the shadows, ready to pounce ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: 1st Script
I wonder what your point in this script was? It seems somewhat jumbled and mixed-up... The Boss is interesting, but seems a little unnecessarily cruel. And what is the meaning ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Harry Potter rewriten (it's rough, but I like it)
Your story was exciting and had an interesting twist--thumbs up to you! However, it was somewhat hard to understand--I noticed a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. And I think ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: Unexpected Love... SSBB Peach, Marth, Ike, Zelda
Wow...good job. I was hooked through the whole story. But as Mogay Ryt said, you sometimes used 1st person pronouns which made the story a little confusing. I also spotted ...
Nov 12, 2009