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Hi! Since you requested some more reviews, here I am! :) Humans are curious beings:inquisitive, sensitive, rash. You should add a space after the colon. :P She laughed at some ...

Whoa. Very intensified. Also, are you sure this belongs in historical fiction? Seems to me more like romantic... Anyway, on to the nitpicks! That, was when I heard the knock ...

Wow. That was really nice! :) I don't believe I found any typos, either. The especially interesting part of the story is how Cinderella seems a little reluctant to have ...

Whoa. I'll say that was intense! :) First thing: please change rating to at least 12+, because of a certain bad word in it. Again, I noticed a lot of ...

Hey Irish! Hope you don't mind if I review this for you. :) First things first--ooh. This thing was really horror-ish, and sorta violent! Glad you rated it appropriately. Hope ...

Hi, it's me yet again! I really like this series. :) Hope you post part 4 soon! and a Vorog team uncover s a secret of pure horror Add bolded ...

Oh my gosh, I can't believe no one has done a review on this yet! :O Probably the first criticism remark I can make after reading through this is the ...

Hi, it's me again! :) You have a couple reviews on this already, so I'll be nit-picky and gritty. The Lizarians and humans make a great discovery, and attempt to ...

Hey, I really need some more reviews, so I'm going to review this for you! :) Dwindling Lizarian and Human ships were blasting away behind us I really think this ...

Hi! Here as requested. :D That was great, nice job. :) I really liked how the female won in the end... Anyway, down to business. So first things first. The ...

OK, this was nice! I liked the excitement, and I followed it pretty well without reading the first chapter. Good job. :) But it was somewhat hard to understand because ...

Wow, you have quite a few reviews on this one. But anyway, here I am, as requested! OK, I noticed some verb tense changes. It's very common among writers, and ...

Hi, Logan! Great story, there must be a part 4! OK, here you go: Margaret put her brown, long hair in a quick pony-tail I suggest switching around the order ...

Good job, Brushfire! Nice to see you're already becoming a part of YWS! :D :) Anyway, here are some major things and also some nitpicks: First of all, spacing. Put ...

Hi, it's SiSi again, here to do a review. You certainly have an interesting story... :) To begin: "Sadly, she died when Emily was just a baby - Emily never ...