Freakette

Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep all this in mind when editing! I was afraid I was overstuffing info in here, guess I was right :s

:D thanks for the review! And well, with bear rugs, I'd imagine the people killing those rugs are only out for the fur (same with the seal cubs being killed ...

When you wrote out beautiful, you forget the "a". "be-u-ti-ful" *"bea-u-ti-ful" Just a simple typo hah

c: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'll update when I can. c:

:D Thanks for all this feedback! Honestly, there's a huge twist in this story involving Liam, Sophia and a person you haven't gotten to yet. :P It makes me happy ...

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Thanks :D This is a pretty rough first draft, and it's a story that I'm mostly writing for fun xD but I'll include that in the description xD thanks again, ...

Ooh, Audy, thank you for the long review, there are some really good point, but these characters aren't in Europe, and it's 1886, the year the very first prototype recipe ...

Thanks Madi and LindsayG. Glad to know it's not too rigid or anything. I was kind of worrying about if it was too robotic... And LindsayG, I'll take that paragraph-splitting ...

Interesting. I like how you took a beginning that sounded like a generic vampire/werewolf story, and spun it into something else. I was thinking werewolves, but I like this better. ...

Thanks, Audy and LindsayG. :D I'm glad you like this so much. Even if there wasn't much criticism, it's still great to know what you think about it. I'll be ...

Thanks for the comments. AngelKnight, thanks, I hadn't even remembered I could do that, lol. And Blondie, I already had so much written that I got impatient. Now each post ...

Thanks for the comment. The only reason I put so many chapters up is because I had so much of the story written already, but I'll make the start and ...

Thanks for the comment, and yeah, I probably should splice the chapters... e.e as for Wraith, I didn't find his location exactly important the way things were going for Annabelle ...

o: That's some pretty powerful stuff. I really like it, it conveys the doubt and pain in the narrator very well. Great job, I wish I could write poetry like ...