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Teenweirdo, Children run and the leaves crunch at their feet. Maybe you could put 'crunch under their feet'? I think that would make itsound better. I liked it! I agree, ...

Hey Kaylyn, I did feel your poem. Although, I think you tried to rhyme too hard. I find that when I write poetry if I try and make the words ...

I enjoyed this :smt023 Was it talking about people? That's what I got out of it mostly, like how people may expect others to be a certain way, but often ...

*Claps* This was good. I love reading poetry, this was really really good! Oh, I already said that. Um, put some periods and stuff, that's all I have to say. ...