Frangipani

I like this poem a lot, but as aforementioned, it could do with a bit more length. And then, the world ended. The stars fell down like tear drops, I ...

Wow. This is really, really... beautiful. Stunning. I really liked it. petals swirling, sun approaching, no sweet nothings, I like the way you ended the stanza there, but left it ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It flows extremely well, and keeps the reader interested and captivated. I thought the way the first stanza had an extra line made it unique. ...

Wow, I really, really liked this. I love the line "framed within precise dimensions". I really liked the way to flowed, but I prefer the way Aedomir set it out ...