Francis

I do get the poem. And i like it. I personally like to see exploration of the motives and ideas bloom in shrinked poems like this more than reading a ...

Well, I truly hope that this is just a poem to you, that you wrote this just for the sake of exploring a motive and putting together the idea of ...

The title is perfect. Often the title is what gives the reader a certain perspective on the act. Fancy water I cant explain how much I like, because in today ...

Ok, there is few things I would like to refer to. I believe it would be very good thing to introduce the names of the boys, the mans sons, even ...

I am walking along the beach, alone. It is 3 AM. Still awake. Thinking about everything that happened the previous day, big things, but they couldn't be avoided. So, deep ...