FrancescaFromThePast

Wow! I loved this. What made it unique is the fact that you used a different voice in a different perspective that made the entirety of your piece as dark ...

This is a good piece and you really are speaking based on your experiences because a normal 21 year old would never risk him or herself with such responsibility that ...

This is a good personal example of a piece. You just didn't do the "telling", but also the "showing" in order to make the readers feel what you are trying ...