FragmentsOfSorrow

Congratulations, arspoetica! You are my first non-poem to review! I am a story-writer myself, so I will enjoy seeing how others write! First things first: Don't be afraid to change ...

Sadly, I must disagree with most about the flow and rhythm of the poem. In my personal opinion, most of the stanzas were too wordy, or didn't mesh well with ...

Great poem, all in all. Though I don't know you, I am quite proud of you for having the guts to post it on here. :) On a more related ...

Wow, that was just...beautiful! I love the first two lines the most, I think. The first line, to catch a falling star, is something I think everyone subconsciously wishes they ...

Hahaha, oh, my friend. You make me smile! :D I looooove 54, just because I'm a writing nerd, and prepositional phrases rock! (Unless you're in latin. -.-) I've never noticed ...

This is a story I had actually thought about writing a while back. Well, something similar. So its cool to see you writing an idea I once had. Anyways... To ...

Howdy! So, this has GREAT potential to be an awesome story. The plot is there, it just needs a tad bit of work. The beginning was great. That first statement ...