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Re: The Unsilenced War: Chapter 3
Pretty good! I didn't notice a lot of grammar mistakes, which is good! I think you left a big cliff hanger. I can't wait to find out more about the ...
Mar 13, 2014 -
Re: Sleep Well (chapter 1)
I think it is really good for fan fiction. I did notice a few grammar mistakes, but no big deal. I got interested really quick. The first paragraph makes you ...
Mar 12, 2014