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Re: CAMERON'S JOURNAL
Hello! Thorns here for a review! Mmm...I see what you're trying to do here, but this needs expanding. I think Cameron needs more fleshing out, because right now he just ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Dear Girl On The Train
Hi! I liked the premise. I ride the train a lot, and often somebody will catch my eye in some way or another and I wish I could talk to ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to Alliteration
Haha, I see what you did there. I hate it too. i don't really see the point of it. But you know, if you wanted to make yourself more clear, ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: The Town of Whill
Hello! FourThorns here. It's my third review ever, so I would take everything I say with a grain of salt, but nonetheless, I hope you'll find this helpful. So, the ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 1 You've got to be kidding me?
Hello! FourThorns here for her [my] second review! Ever! God, I love these kinds of stories. the special kid who goes to a special school for special people. No matter ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Frozen Hope- chapter 5
Hello! Sorry you had to wait so long for a first review! So, what I notice off the bat is that you've got a good sense of setting-I can really ...
Mar 29, 2015