FourThorns

Hello! Thorns here for a review! Mmm...I see what you're trying to do here, but this needs expanding. I think Cameron needs more fleshing out, because right now he just ...

Hi! I liked the premise. I ride the train a lot, and often somebody will catch my eye in some way or another and I wish I could talk to ...

Haha, I see what you did there. I hate it too. i don't really see the point of it. But you know, if you wanted to make yourself more clear, ...

Hello! FourThorns here. It's my third review ever, so I would take everything I say with a grain of salt, but nonetheless, I hope you'll find this helpful. So, the ...

Hello! FourThorns here for her [my] second review! Ever! God, I love these kinds of stories. the special kid who goes to a special school for special people. No matter ...

Hello! Sorry you had to wait so long for a first review! So, what I notice off the bat is that you've got a good sense of setting-I can really ...