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Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch.V: Path of a Country 1
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, with the map. The map looks wonderful at yhe first glance. I really like how it looks like a real map. ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 2 Part 1)
Hey! Forever here with a short review!! It has a good sense of mystery which I like. It gives me an impression that something big has either happened and we ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Six, Part Two
Hey!! Forever here with a short review!! You forgot to link part one here and the second part there in 5.1. Link them or best remove that line. We can ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.3
Heyy Harry!! Forever here with a short review!! That was definitely not very polite of Harry to let Aria handle the middle as I guess that's the toughest part yet ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: New Beginnings
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all with the setting. The first setting was the Principal's office, I reckon. When I started to read the story, I thought ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch. IV: The Town in No Mans Land 3
Hey!! Forever herr with a review! I feel pity for Claire. She seems to be in a desperate condition. She can't accept the fact and above all, she can't accept ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch. IV: The Town in No Mans Land 2
Hey! Forever here with a review! I am extremely sorry that I could not attend your special day. In the meantime, events came to a head and I was forced ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch. IV: The Town in No Mans Land 1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! A lot of questions and answers we had here. First of all, we came to know about Leonard's religious beliefs. I liked how you ...
Sep 11, 2021 -
Re: Her
Hey RandomTalks, why do you talk random? I am quite eager to know :) Now to the review. I really liked the idea of the story. How simple the idea ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Letter To A Lost One
Hey! Forever here with a very short review! Wow, the characters were so real and believable. We saw a great deal of understanding in Rebecca. I really like how you ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 5.2
Hey! Forever here with a short review! It's the 23rd part of the story, I guess. Wow, we have reached far XD. Now to the review :) Aria seemed to ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch.III: Claire 5
Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Life in hiding is one of the most difficult things in the World. I wonder if Emma actually introduced Leonard as her cousin. ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. III: Claire 4 (Reworked)
Hey! Forever here with a review! Now about this chapter, I am not quite sure about the time when it took place. However, I can assume it took place two ...
Sep 10, 2021 -
Re: A Carolina Millennial in A Prehistoric Tribe: Chapter Six, Part One
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Then a full-body X Rey, MRI scans, and they sused out of me the two times I had smoked as a teenager. I guess ...
Sep 9, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. III: Claire 3 (Reworked)
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! It was a great part, first of all with that cliffhanger in the end. I really liked it :D To begin with, I don't ...
Sep 9, 2021