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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 19.1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a relatively calmer part. As far as I interpreted it correctly, this seemed like an easy journey . And that actually makes ...
Nov 15, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 18.2
Hey! Forever here with a review!! A saw it coming... I did expect something like this to happen. Well, so it seems like Mr. Summer's team did something to distract ...
Nov 14, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 18.1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay, so we have frequent tone changes throughout all these chapters. It just shows the mood fluctuations they are having while undertaking all the ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 17.5
Hey! Forever here with a tiny review Wow. A few chapters more. Let's get into the review now. They are so so hopeful to reach the forest going through the ...
Nov 12, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 17.4
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Comparatively, this was a funnier part than the other ones. Harry definitely got some great power getting the guns that he fired 60 shots ...
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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 17.3
Hey!! Forever here with a review! Well. I felt like yelling the moment I read Daisy's name. I mean that was a journey from the top of Mt. Everest to ...
Nov 10, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 17.2
Hey!! Forever here with a review! Relax. I am never going to catch up. Pretty sure about that. Anyway, to the review. Well, so we have some history here. Okay ...
Nov 9, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 17.1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well. Hope. I see a great deal of hope in humanity's side in this chapter. I did see this hope coming but in an ...
Nov 8, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 16.5
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Well. This part kind of sounded like a plot twist here. First of all, I thought a human being was going to fie but ...
Nov 7, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch.XI: Departure 2
Hey! Forever here with a review!! I wonder a lot about what this roars belong to. Like the story isn't really fictional but there are fictional elements such as dragons ...
Nov 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 16.3
Hey! Forever here with a review!! They have finally found what can be called a very revealed hiding place. The crates do appear to be very unsafe for hiding but ...
Nov 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 16.2
Hey! Forever here with a review!! The detail of the floor further confirmed that the tunnel actually belonged to the aliens. However, I am still not sure what the actual ...
Nov 4, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch.XI: Departure 1
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This part was a great one, as always. Honestly, I didn't expect them to leave behind Martha and go on their own. However, seems ...
Nov 3, 2021 -
Re: The 13th Floor
Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! To begin with, the inconsistency of tense. Either write the whole story in past tense or in present tense. It completely depends on ...
Nov 2, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 16.1
Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! That was an interesting turn of events. I did reckon that the place could be a human settlement or human made and the ...
Nov 2, 2021
