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Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay so this was a solid start here. As far as the first chapter is concerned, it was quite great. It helped a lot ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! The game was perfectly hilarious. From the very beginning of this part, we had that sense like something was wrong, out of order I ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an interesting read. A part of it was just the repetition of the previous part but I liked how you went further ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! It's quite interesting how you have developed the character of Iris. I find their nature quite relatable. It's pretty sad what a condition they ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review!! Okay so this went between expected and unexpected. I expected that there would be quite a large number of people and that happened. ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Finally, Claire is going to meet Leonard and I am very excited to see how this meeting goes. It's going to be a ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was one of the most interesting parts in this chapter as well as in quite a while. Things definitely took a turn here ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! I liked the tiny time skip we had in the beginning. That actually broadens the mystery of Ahmad. Apparently, he seems to be ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! I haven't read the other stories, so my review will be completely based on this chapter. Anyway, to the review now. I think there ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! I like how the friendship between Claire and Daphne is slowly and steadily deepening and is already a great one. I do sometimes wonder ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Time to celebrate that I have completed reading a novel on YWS and that you have completed publishing a novel on YWS. Anyway, let's ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was quite an exciting part we had here. Thanks to the aliens that they have made the humans' way a lot easier than ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Final chapter!! We are in the final chapter, I can't believe it! 107 parts in total(taking into account that this chapter is going to ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This part was a great part. I liked the overall pace of this part and how it didn't feel as rushed as the other ...

Hey! Forever here with minute review!! Okay so to the critiques first. First and foremost, I don't think the bwginning was catchy enough to draw the readers in. You can ...