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Thanks for the advice folks. I'll sort it out to make it less confudling. Thanks again

I've changed the "he" to "my stepfather" that should sort it. I've never read a book called "a child called it" who wrote it?

??? the headmaster didn't kill anybody, he simply got Johnny refered to Social Services and his stepfather went to jail. No one died.

OK, English homework done Nothing wrong with the idea or the story as far as i can tell, flows really well, but something needs to happen, as Griffin said or ...

I think someone would claim copyright to that idea Griff. I'll be back to critic this soon, just after i've finished my English homework...

darn it, Peter Pan was published in 1911, so if you wait 6 years you could do a report on it then, The Three Musketeers was first published in 1844.

No, dont edit it, i just thought it was strange thats all, that a Male would think the character was male, and the female would think it was a female.

Thanks for the advice, thats really useful as i dont normaly write Prologue's so i'll take the advice to heart. I'll most likely change the bit about depth charges, it ...

When i first got Deadly Doses, when ever my parents annoyed me, i used to go get it and read it, saying aloud some interesting symptoms.... Anyway 1) Scene of ...

Miss thankyou. but dont worry, your not the first to make that mistake.

IT WORKED!!!! *jumps up and hugs Snoink* Thats been bugging me for ages, thank you!! We have Italics!

I think Snoink caught all the error's. I enjoyed reading it and it made me giggle at some points, it appealed to my sence of humour. This is going somewhere, ...

*hurriedly feels forehead for trance of fever* no grammer mistakes? wow, thats rare, im gonna edit now and little green lines will pop up everywere. Thanks for the critic Eloere, ...

Sorry the italics are not working, again...

This is very Cinderella and Little Princess, but i like it. It's a happy ending "awwww" type thingy with an extra twist at the end, Cinderella being real. Its another ...