FluttershyFan

Actually, this is an assignment is for school. That's so weird!

I promise you I was not copying you and I had no idea that you had a poem that was just the same. This poem was an assignment for school ...

you are not stupid for asking the time period. I have chosen that to be an element of the reader's imagination and to be honest, you can choose. Sorry about ...

Your not a bother. Thank you for widening my perspective.

Also, sorry for all my grammar errors in my bio thing, I did say I was a perfesonal splelr.

The part where he dies is supposed to be short and quick to set the scene for the rest of the story. Also, just wait. I need more points and ...

Just to clarify, I said he would plea for death because he was in so much pain that putting him out of his misery , like the guard said, would ...

thank you for the review. Like I said before: I am aware of the syllable problem so that does not need to be touched on. Your review is already very ...

Thank you. I did consider the race line and I appreciate your comment. I was going to put it your way originally it's just that "race" rhymes easier.