FlamingPhoenix

Thanks! :D

Thank you again for the great review. I agree this chapter would have been a really good place to get into how everyone is feeling and how they worry about ...

Thank you so much for the great review. I'm planning on rewriting my book when I'm done. So I will add everything you said in this review into all my ...

I really liked this short story! I hope you post more like it! And good job! :D

Thanks again for the great review Wolfe! When I rewrite my story I'll go back on this review and try and add some of it into the chapter. :D

Okay! I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the wise words!

Get again thank you for the review. I'm glad I gave you some action in this chapter, there will be a lot more in the later chapters. As I write ...

WOW! This was a very long and great review. Thanks for it. I will go and fix up a few things. Just to let you no I'm planing on going ...

Thanks for the review! :D I'll tag you when I post another chapter if you like.

Thanks again for the review they are really helpful. And I under stand what i'm doing with the nouns and verbs that is something I need to fix. I'm glad ...

I'm glad that helped. And when I rewrite the chapters and stuff I'll try to put that across a bit more.

Thanks Zoom for the review it was really great. Now about Viper not know who his father is. Remember in the prologue Quake said he will get to train him ...

Thanks Zoom for all the wise input! I will have a look at the problems very soon i hope. Now about the flash backs. That is going to come into ...

Your welcome! :D

Thanks! It take me a wile to get into my groove and them my writing is really good according to me, but it is always nice to get the input ...