FlamingPhoenix

Like always, your reviews are great fun to read, and your reactions to what happens in the chapter are always interesting. First, thank you for the review like always, and ...

Thank you for the review.

Ahhh, gosh I forgot to get back to you about this review! I'm so sorry it took so long, been having a rather rough time lately. But anyway, thank you ...

Thank you so much for the review! It helps so much! This is of course the very first draft, so all advice is very much welcome. I tend to over-share ...

Thank you so much for the review! :D

Hey! Thank you so much for the review! I did indeed see that spelling mistake yesterday when I was editing some things and forgot to go on here to fix ...

Hi Cupid! Thank you so much for the review! Has given me a lot of ideas for what needs to be added into this chapter and what I should remember ...

Thank you so much for the review and the help! I will work on the commas and spelling and the pacing. :D I'm glad you did enjoy the chapter though, ...

Thank you for your review! If you go check out @felistia's story you will also see she has a map I made for her! :D I don't know how I ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! :D Hahaha I know some of them are really long, I guess I missed a few because ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad you like the change in Richard's personality, it was one of those things that was something I really wanted to ...

Thanks!

Thank you for the review Andrew! Yeah this chapter wasn't one of my best, I'm not to happy with it myself, XD I had so much trouble writing it. I ...

Oh my gosh I forgot about this! XD I wrote this a while ago. I'm surprised you read it. It does need a bit of a tidy up, I will ...

Hopefully it will pay off. :D