Firestalker

=.= My computer hates me. This is the second time I'm writing this reply cause my computer just keeps restarting whenever I finish writing this. -.- So yeah... Hey Jet! ...

Wow, :P It seems as though I'm the only unemployed writer in the whole of YWS xD. :sigh:, Oh well, post when possible Disturbed, you know your fans will be ...

Thanks DissolvedIntoCoffee! I also like the opening reveal about the character being a vampire by yawning. Cool and original. I'm glad you liked it. Originally I wasn't intending on doing ...

Wow, three reviews since I last visited this page. Thanks guys! All of you! AngerManagement - O_o I want to learn that language lol lol indeed, hehe. Although I don't ...

Haha, I see, okay, I'll be looking forward to your edited version. Till then, see ya! -Fire-

Hey Kit, Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it *grins*. (The use of the word sentinels makes me think of Wolverine and the X-men.) Wolverine and X-men huh? Hmmm, ...

Thanks :D :D I just cant get it how did the vampire got inside an alley..? Well, my MC did not have enough control over her body at that particular ...

Thanks for sharing your views of my story, Its greatly appreciated ^^

Hehe, will do, thanks for the advise :P

Thanks to you too TigerShaard (Nice name) it does help a lot, even the showing the slightest of mistakes to me is a great help, Thanks!!

Its okay if you're not good at editing or grammar. That's another reason why YWS is here. We learn by reviewing other peoples work. After a few reviews you could ...

Heheh, Thanks Guys, I owe you a lot for reviewing it after such a long time. I also hope others will too. Joseph, - Thank you for reviving your presence ...

I finally posted Chapter 2 guys (who are still interested) :P Link -

I finally posted Chapter 2 (guys who are still interested) :P Link -

I didn't say that you needed to jump into the plot i meant that it was boring as the reader (Me in this case) had a lot, an extreme lot ...