Firestalker

His thoughts jumbled in his mind, like an ocean that had started [s]his[/s] it surge in order to defy any other hope of life. Okay here we normally use 'it' ...

“Coming mother,” I [s]tiredly [/s]shouted back tiredly . Its better this way. I was not leaving, my night mares were real, they were my past, my now, and my future, ...

Then the lights went off and my eyes closed…to embark on another fascinating adventure, to have another riveting journey and to add another story to my collection! I stood staring ...

Ahh don't worry, patience people will come and critique, like me. And I'd do anything for a vampire lover, well almost anything. And also i liked the other chapters and ...

ooh Narnia..... She shuts her eyes, and lets herself unwind into a daydream, as she often does these days. The sluggish summer days and being alone in the house—today her ...

Ah lets see We had met through our classes and made fast friends. That does not make any sense, well it does but you need to change it. “Yes, but ...

I hope this is as scary as the others say it is. Pandora watched as her parents left though the f r o[s]r[/s]nt door. A shadow passed[s] passed[/s] her face, ...

Sakura stared into the mirror of the changing room cubicle that she had incapacitated herself into. For the last hour, she had been frantically trying on every dress in the ...

I've never critiqued a Naruto fan-fiction lets see. Please PM me if i did a good job. Warm blood on cold skin. A kunai driven deep into an opponent’s chest. ...

Oooooh a Doctor who fanfic yay!!!!!!!!!1 And it seems your a doctor who Fan?? Martha straightens her clothes and glances over at the Doctor as he whispers gentle words to ...

“Yeah. I know. No really Mom I’m fine. Yeah, I’ll call you tomorrow with the date. I love you too. Bye,” After I hung up with my mom I sat ...

Ohh another chapter :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: "You can call me Afina," the girl offered, sliding off the sill. Her clothes consisted of mostly har

Ashley hadn’t been feeling well ever since he’d eaten the egg. He felt heavy, too weighed down to move and his entire body was coated with a thin film of ...

Ahh At last I've found the first part of the second part i critiqued while ago. An it is exactly what i expected. Brilliant. And twenty six chapters is a ...

First of all i must say that you better point out to the reader where and when the flashback stopped because it confused me a lot. You should add something ...