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Re: Untitled, for now
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Sep 15, 2015
ate wrote: The way you open the story is excellent; there was so much visual imagery, and so much reaction from the character that I was able to manifest the ... -
Re: First part
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Sep 15, 2015
ZAP wrote: The grin Is this guy evil? I don t know, but it looks like Skywalker in the Star Wars movies has come into the world of fantasy. No ... -
Re: Bestfriends..
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Sep 15, 2015
Hello! Stegosaurus here for a review! I am glad you are able to share this beginning of your story! I enjoyed the thought of this story also as much as ... -
Re: Introduction
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Sep 15, 2015
Hello there, Kathryn, I am here to review this intro! I'm not sure if this a revised version or a rough copy, but either way this is an intriguing topic. ... -
Re: Such tracks- Chapter 1
Good story line does have some line mistakes.needs more description.You need to adjust fonts for him thinking about the homework that is no longer narration.On your sentence Before you knew ...
Sep 14, 2015