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Re: 12 Months Later
Hi, CheaperPoetry, Firefox here. I got the shivers reading January and they still haven't stopped. I don't think I've ever read something so haunting. If it weren't a personal question ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: The Drowners -2-
Hello, Firefox here! This chapter is even more captivating than the first. Your descriptions are quite strong, and I especially like that of the filter, "there is a crack along ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 1
Wow. Excellent opening, hooked me and reeled me right in. Rease's repetition of short sentences to calm herself is well described, and Trina's actions and almost indifferent words show instead ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: The Drowners -1-
Ollo, Anna, Firefox here :). I appreciate the way Ember describes her surroundings (the waves, the office) in that, she's not going out of her way to find original descriptions. ...
Jun 11, 2015