Fellow

My username after the character :P

Ehm. I`m sorry. That happend to you...

And Lord Anzius. Wait for the story to unwrap itself will ya? Ashea and Nayn will show up at some point! *giggle*

Its about you? Auch... sorry about that. Great that you have the power now... :)

Yes still writing at it. And no i will not marry you... i`m still 17 :) and i dont even know you.. so badluck

Nothing to point out. The rhymes are fine, the words aswell ... Its a very used idea but yours is original in the rhymes way. Ah. The punctuation... you don't ...

Yes he can't speak. And yea ... i`m rather like Fellow in the book (exept the part of stealing things).

great song... I`ll try to make a guitar song for it if you don't mind.

First of all Cheers Sierra for review! Second to clear your mind Thorns - The sentence is rather a metaphorical one if you get the point. He wasn't screaming "I ...

Not at all.

Lord Anzius. Probably its because i`m romanian and i don't follow the same rules in the writing of a story. ... I can't explain... I hope you get the point.

1.) Who is Nayn ? - His brother, Ashea is his sister. 2.) Who stabbed him? - Death of the hero (part one)- Anyway my bad i didn't post the ...

Well Kaylyn atm its around 400 pages (writen in Word). And i don't think i`ll be able to post it all on the forum cause as i said before i`m ...

To explain the part when Ilith start to undress Ashea. Its actually a part that reminds the reader that at some point in the book they were in love with ...

Yes i`ve finished the book and now i`ll just rewrite it to improve it and so. The following year maybe... And the trap question... You got me there... hmm... A ...