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o.O I`m the second who reviews your story. Not saying that it's a contest :D ‘My stable –’ - I would suggest you decribe his reaction. Maybe the hesitation of ...

Oh! here I am at the second part. First: Again well written and so. Nothing to say about your way of writing, but... *oh Jesus! Here she goes!* It was ...

Even with a broken arm I`m here to review *mouse gliding under the gyps*. :!: I was so interested by the math hour that I had time to read this ...

:O - please tell me that you didn't wrote that! If you did then I ... oups... you got a lot of work to do. I don't know the plot ...

Hey. First of all very nice idea and writing skills. Second the things that you should do to improve it a little: 1.) You should write something about what Jamie ...

Hey. Amazing story... Really extraordinary! Now... the review: They are small and petite... "small" and "petite" means the same thing. You`ve just changed the language. you something that [s] you ...

:smt026 *the crowd yelling : Part 2! Part 2! Part 2!* :smt026 - Then i`ll review it all. Luck! -Akayl

Ah! The second part of the second chapter... Let's see what trouble you three got into now -.-` “Stop that!” Aanam slapped my hand, lightly. “Why? Roma said so?” - ...

Hey. Glad to see that you posted chapter 2 :) *glow eyes* First grammar: It miught have something to do with the fact none of us could catch a seat. ...

Ok this is the best chapter of them all. Descriptions, actions and reactions. Nothing to say or to add at this part. And yes - the name in the LOTR ...

Review: “You’re… you’re the Warrior Queen,” Fallyn sputtered nervously. All thoughts of not showing weakness was all gone now. The floorboards creaked as Fallyn shifted her wait to her other

This freaked me out! C`mon! At least tell me there will be people popping up in the back of the main character. Seriously. I was reading this chapter with the ...

*Raising an eyebrow.* Nothing bad to say about it. Just need to be smoothed a bit here and there. 1.) At the first glance - You say that she was ...

Prologue! Even with a broken arm I am here to review *the mouse gliding on the pad underneath the plaster*. It`s well written and you wrote enough to drawn the ...

It`s well written for a prologue. Needs some clean it a big and put more descriptions : I stood there surrounded by an endless marsh of mud and these marshes, ...