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Re: Earth Driven-Prologue
Heya! Alrighty then, shall we jump to the review? Paragraphs: I will not put anything in quotations here, for if I explain correctly, you will know what I mean. Okay, ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Two - Through the Forest
think this one was my favorite. The way you say things are really funny, for example "He had to be sure that he wasn’t daydreaming, otherwise, he might lose his ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Pennies and Drains
Hey, Just gotta say I loved this poem! It's really well written and I think you get a good point across! So well done and keep writing! Felix Windbow
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Chapter one, the true beginning
Cool. More action, less talk. one minute while I make a few edits.
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Chapter one, the true beginning
Fun facts! Levi means united, yet he gets taken by the Rulers of the Earth. Felix means happy and prosperous. let's all hope that the fourtune of his name will ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Earth Driven-Prologue
Thank you! Those are the names of my two best friends. I am trying to make their personality as I might envision theirs just by looking at them. So far, ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Prologue
Hi BlondieMissiAngel Just that reminder was enough to give my determanation a boost and I ran faster It is spelled determination The ocassional bird sang it's soft melody It is ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Earth Driven-Prologue
First of all, I wish to appologize for any spelling mistakes. I will run it through a spell check as soon as I am avalible to do so. Second, this ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Chapter One- The Prophecy
Hi sis. I loved it! full of drama. a thesorous could be used to brighten up the story... otherwise, nice work! your bro, Felix Windbow
Nov 27, 2010
