FelixWindbow

Hi! I am here like I promised! This chapter was a good one. It was the part where the boy meets the girl. One of the most important parts. I ...

Hey there! This story is brilliant! It does get gory during in the middle, but still. The description of the scenery at the start was the best, I could clearly ...

I pulled off in the dead of night , onto the sandy shore where I began to build a fire to keep me warm and ward off curious animals. When ...

Hi there there is one thing that confused me in this she sat down and pulls out what looks like a cell phone you are using two diffrent tenses, past ...

Just a few typing errors I walked to the edge of the tree's again there is no ' in trees Sure, it was steep, but it was nothing my lean, ...

Hi sister, I saw some things that I would change. I could hear only the crunching of the dying leaves beneath my feet and the wind howling in my ears ...