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Re: The Prince of Heaven and Hell (Chapter 2- Backlash From The System)
Here we go, Much of this isn't in paragraphs, so I don't really know what to say about that. It switches from lines and lines to blocks. I think you ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: Mists of Doubt
Here we go, So, this has quite the message to it. That's great to press on, so kudos for doing it so well and clean, man. I don't know if ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: Dare to be different or dead
Here we go, I am not good with grammar, so I'll just wait for one of them to show up because I think that they will help you out there. ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: U and I. U is my beloved love and I is the desperate me in love.
Here we go, I see a name at the bottom. Is that you because I just want to know that you didn't steal this from someone? It repeats a lot, ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: To Jimmy.
I don't know what I'm doing, but here we go. "Good Lord, it seems like the only natural thing in this dull place, darling." I don't understand who Jimmy is ...
Jul 4, 2020