FeatheryClouds

I am absolutely loving this story so far. I'm going to talk about some quotes I liked, then I'll move on to the overall review & advice. Lot 56 was ...

this is actually really cool to me as someone who can't think of rhymes to save his life. Anyway, I'm gonna talk about some lines I liked & then give ...

This was possibly one of the most interesting things I've ever read. Had me ignoring my siblings just to keep reading it. I LOVED how you described everything, and just ...

Holy plot twist! That was a GREAT story. I loved how incredibly descriptive you were with the environment and the character's actions, it made it really fun to read. I ...

THIS IS SO REAL. I feel like you've put something I experience every day into words, which is something I personally have never been able to do. I really like ...

Your writing style totally nails that frantic, internal thought process during stressful moments; you can really feel the protagonist's mind racing. The dialogue feels super natural and keeps the plot

I like it! it's a pretty good representation of abuse as far as I know. I like the way you show the mental effects of it too, like the character ...

This is really cool! I like how all the words end with ing. (There's probably a word for that but I can't be bothered to look it up.) I like ...