Fathima97

Thanks a lot for your suggestion. Yeah it seems better that way. :) just tried rhyming with words that popped up. I haven't tried before is why it didn't work ...

I'm here to review your story. I enjoyed it alot. Mainly because of it's decriptive language and the way you started it abruptly continuing with overwhelming imagery. Phrases like "Banshee ...

Hi. glad you liked it. Yeah I know it's so sad when they leave. Even when my cat left (probably she might have died) I never saw her after she ...