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Fathima97

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: my heart is torn

    Hey I'm here for a review. This poem to me is very heart-touching. It positions itself firmly within the universal theme of unrequited love. Yet it seems the poet is ...

    Nov 15, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: This world is a game! win it or loose it

    I'm here to review your work. Though in a small content you've successfully presented a broad idea trough a single sentence. The challenge of the world compared to a "black ...

    Nov 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: I loved, I killed, then I lied.

    I'm here to review your story. I enjoyed it alot. Mainly because of it's decriptive language and the way you started it abruptly continuing with overwhelming imagery. Phrases like "Banshee ...

    Nov 15, 2016


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