Fatallis

This really well written, and I like the way that it flows. Although from about here: As first light scratched the violet sky, His shadow teetered towards the west; onwards, ...

I always love it when I read a poem and the topic is something I agree with. Society is always a good thing to right about because of the nature ...

It's good for your first poem :) I remember my first poem wasn't anyway to the standard of my current ones. I don't know how to explain it, but it ...