FatCowsSis

Sis here to review for Review Day! Overall, this was an amazing poem, and I loved the entire concept of it! Alright, a few nitpicky things real quick, then I'll ...

Thanks TJ! I said the other link because I knew you wanted it...

Thanks! You're the best!

Thank you so much!

Thanks!

Thanks! I tried dividing it into stanzas, but it didn't show up when I changed it....

Thanks! I'll see what I can do about fixing the jerkiness!

Thanks! I'll see what I can do about fixing the jerkiness!

Sorry, didn't realize there was a comment on this 'till now. If you wish I'll "enlighten" you by PM tomorrrow!

Lol, I believe it.

Thanks AEChronicle! I didn't realize there were others like this, I just needed to write something about it. -Sis

Happy? And yeah, I guess short and choppy is kinda my style. I have difficulty combining lines. It doesn't feel right to me. Thanks so much! Now after all that ...

Aw, thanks!

Thanks TJ

Thanks DreamWork!